Edits to long essay 1

I received great feed back from classmates and my professor on my long essay number 1 titled, "A mothers love and a daughters growth." I also received some ideas how on how to better my CNF writing. I believe if I were to choose to essay to publish I would add some more detail in specific areas of my piece, giving my readers more information to relate better to certain instances I speak about. I could also add one or two more memories about my mother and I that have to do with my growth idea, memories that were good and bad for both of us.